Jill Williamson is a chocolate loving, daydreaming, creator of kingdoms. She writes weird books in lots of weird genres like fantasy (Blood of Kings and Kinsman Chronicles), science fiction (Replication), and dystopian (The Safe Lands trilogy). She has a podcast/vlog at www.StoryworldFirst.com. You can also find Jill on Instagram, Facebook, Twitter, Pinterest, or on her author website. Tagboth (Tag for short) is a goldhorn dragon from Belfaylinn, a hidden fantasy realm on the western end of the Sargasso Sea. Jill is working on the first book of this tale for this year’s Grow an Author series.
There is one question I have been hearing a lot lately either in emails or in person, and it’s some variation of “What do I do when I’m stuck after only a few chapters?”
That’s a hard question to answer without knowing more about your story, so here is a list of ideas to help. This summary comes from this week’s Storyworld Shorts video, which you can watch by clicking here.
-“Who is my main character?” Make sure you have a clear main character that the reader can root for.
-“What does my main character (my hero) want?” You need to know what your main character wants in the story to be able to know how he will behave in each scene.
-“What is the story question (story goal)?” Your main character needs to have a goal that will last until the story is done. Frodo making the decision to hold onto the One Ring isn’t “story goal” enough. It’s when he decides to carry the ring all the way to Mount Doom to destroy it that we have a strong story goal. It’s important to define the story goal early on so your readers know what to root for as they read.
-“What are the stakes?” What happens if your hero fails to achieve the story goal? It needs to be something worse than getting a failing grade in a class. You don’t have to put the fate of the world at risk, but do keep in mind that the higher the stakes, the more invested your reader becomes.
6. Use Try/Fail cycles to keep things moving. Try/Fail cycles can help you get un-stuck by answering a simple question in one of two ways. First, define what your character wants. Then ask whether or not he will succeed? The answer is one of these two: “Yes, but . . .” or “No, and . . .”
I hope these ideas help you find a way past where you’re stuck and get you back into the story.