I have a thing for real life history that plays out like fiction. Lately, I’ve been reading up on Robert Hanssen and Aldrich Ames. Two men, one from the FBI and one from the CIA, who sold American secrets to the Russian and Soviet intelligence services during and after the Cold War. Traitors, both of them.
The two men weren’t working together, but their overlapping activities made it difficult for the CIA and the FBI to find their leak. Ames was found out first and his capture made it clear that they had not entirely solved their problem. They still had a mole.
In the end, you know what outed Hanssen?
His voice.
The FBI purchased a recording of him speaking to the KGB. Agents working the case recognized the voice, but could not recall who it belonged to. Pilfering through a stack of documents they had obtained along with the recording, the agents found a racist comment–a comment they had heard Robert Hanssen use in conversation. Listening to the recording once more, they realized that it was indeed the voice of their coworker.
When I read this story the first time, I couldn’t help but draw parallels to the literary world. You could tear the covers off books written by my favorite authors, change the font, try to convince me they were written by people I’d never read, but you’d never, ever succeed.
I know their voices.
I’ve read Tasha Alexander enough to know when I’ve picked up one of her stories. I can identify Tana French’s writing without even trying. And JRR Tolkien and Jane Austen, and Jenny B. Jones and Leigh Bardugo and Ally Carter, Ruta Sepetys and Kate Morton and oh, my, gosh Jennifer Donnelly.
These authors have collected words as they’ve traveled through life. Words they’ve polished and played with and turned on the tips of their pens. There’s a cadence to their writing that I recognize. A swagger. A fingerprint-like uniqueness that declares ownership of the tales they spin. They’d have to pull off a magic trick to disguise their voices from me and I sincerely hope they never try.
I pick up my favorite authors’ books because I want to hear them tell me a story. I want to hear their voice in my head. In fact, it’s the deft way they use language that spurs me on in my own efforts to discover and refine my storytelling voice.
What exactly is voice?
The voice of an author is made up of several things:
Words: Authors have an invisible word bank to draw from. This includes words they’ve read and heard as they’ve moved through life. The more words they collect, the bigger their word bank, and yet most authors gravitate toward certain words and phrases. The frequency and application of these words in their writings begin to form something recognizable. Jane Austen’s voice is easy to pick out because of the words she used again and again in her novels.
Syntax: The way an author uses the words they’ve collected to assemble sentences often moves with them from book to book. Even when genres change, our sentences are often shaped in similar ways. Shakespeare is an easy example here. Whether they’re comedies or tragedies, Shakespeare’s writing has a very unique flow.
Tone: While authors can work to adjust their tone for different works, there is often a dominant mood that permeates the pages of their stories. I think of Edgar Allan Poe. Even in his more romantic tales, there is a sense of melancholy. A melancholy readers have come to expect of his works.
And while word choice, syntax, and tone make up much of an author’s voice, they are embellished by the unique character voices the author uses in their books. A well-written character reads differently from the other characters on the page, and yet they are all a part of the author’s storytelling voice.
How do I know if I have a storytelling voice?
Fear not, friend, you have a voice. It’s in there somewhere–a seed maybe, or a green shoot popping through the soil. Perhaps your voice hasn’t been used in a while and it’s a little dry and brittle, but when at last you find the words to write, they will have a rhythm and a tone. They will have a style.
And while there’s no doubt some of us are flashier in the voice department than others, there are stories only you can tell, in a voice only you were given. Developing your voice is not only your responsibility as a storyteller, but it’s also the inevitable outworking of many things you naturally do. So rest easy. If you’re wishing your voice was more mature, there are things you can do to grow it.
How do I develop my storytelling voice?
While developing your storytelling voice occurs naturally with time and effort, it’s not always pretty. It’s a little like going through puberty. And while that season can be uncomfortable for a teen, I love that my boy and his friends learned to laugh with one another when their voices began to change. They realized their voices wouldn’t always sound that way, and even if they squeaked now and then, the things they had to say were worth the occasional awkwardness. They took joy in the process. New writers would do well to adopt this mindset.
Like the changing voices of teenagers, your storytelling voice will improve with time and effort. You need not wait for it to arrive. That’s not how it works anyway. You have to commit yourself to the process. You have to:
Read: For a writer, reading is learning at the hand of an artist. The exposure to other stories and other voices is necessary. Read poetry and novels, non-fiction as well. Read books in the genre you want to write in, and read books intended to stretch your taste and your preferences. As you do so, you will pick up all sorts of things: new words, turns of phrase, syntax, story structure, pacing, and most of all, you’ll be discovering your own preferences.
Practice: There are many ways to practice the craft of writing. I suggest Googling “writing exercises” to simply open your eyes to the free resources out there on the internet. You can also use the search bar on the Go Teen Writers website. We have tons of writing exercises to help grow your voice and your craft.
Another way to practice writing is by journaling. You can journal as yourself or as a character. You can put yourself in the middle of any historical time or event. You can simply dump your emotions onto the page. Any time spent with pen and paper (or computer!) will grow your voice.
Free writing is a very handy tool for practice as well. You simply sit down and write without stopping. You write whatever comes to mind and, in this way, you empty yourself of thoughts. These sessions may not produce anything worth keeping, but they’re often full of raw beauty and may grow into something more with a little effort.
Your voice deepens as you grow, and with every story you tell, it takes on nuance and sheds old habits. Our early efforts may not hit on all the notes, but we improve if we continue to live, and read, and try.
Like our favorite authors, we collect words as we journey along, and we weave them together in a way only we can. Your voice is yours and yours alone. And though it will change and grow, it will always sound just like you.
Which authors have captivated you with their storytelling voices? Can you pinpoint what it is they do so well?
Shannon Dittemore is an author and speaker. Her books include the Angel Eyes trilogy, a supernatural foray into the realm of angels and demons, as well as the fantastical adventure novel Winter, White and Wicked. Its sequel, Rebel, Brave and Brutal is due out January 10, 2023.
Shannon’s stories feature strong female leads grappling with fear and faith as they venture into the wilds of the unknown. She’s often wondered if she’s writing her own quest for bravery again and again.
It’s a choice she values highly. Bravery. And she’s never more inspired than when young people ball up their fist and punch fear in the face.
To that end, Shannon takes great joy in working with young writers, both in person and online at Go Teen Writers, an instructional blog recognized by Writer’s Digest four years running as a “101 Best Websites for Writers” selection.
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Thanks for this post, Ms. Shannon!
I agree with you about Jane Austen and JRR Tolkien’s voices, they are some of my favorites. I also love C. S. Lewis’ voice, and Charles Dickens’ storytelling voices. On the other side of the fiction spectrum, I really love Ms. Stephanie’s writing voice, and Suzanne Collins’, as well. I think that what all of these authors do well is draw me in to their stories, and then their writing voice keeps me stuck in the story. They make the storyworld seem so real, as though the events in the book are actually going on around me. That’s a reason for why “Pride and Prejudice” is one of my favorite comfort reads. 😉
I love all of these voices!
I have always found this interesting, the way an author can take a bunch of letters and prime it into a world. All the books I read have one part or another, or really just the whole thing, that I get sucked in and I can see it happening. I love how authors can transport you to a different world and make it feel so real, you just want to read, read, read.
Yesssss! Totally agree.
My author voice isn’t super developed yet, but every now and then I’ll write something that I feel is unique to me or is representative of what I want my voice to be. I’m not sure how I’d describe it yet, but I know it when I see it. Some of my favorite author voices (and authors) are Gary Schmidt’s, Lois Lowry’s, Norton Juster’s in The Phantom Tollbooth, and Louis Sachar’s in Holes. I suppose I like simple writing that packs a punch with a dash of humor.
That’s a lovely way to describe a voice. Makes me think of Brandon Sanderson who intentionally writes without much flourish.
I love The Phantom Tollbooth! And I’ve only read one of Lois Lowry’s books (Number the Stars) but she’s awesome too!
There are a few authors I can recognize by voice. JRR Tolkien for sure, and Edgar Allen Poe. There’s some others too. One time I read a story, and I said in my head, “Oh, this sounds like this author!” (I think it might’ve been Oscar Wilde) and I looked at the author, and sure enough!
I can recognize Oscar Wilde pretty well, I memorized The Nightingale and the Rose for a project. I love that story!
Thanks for this amazing post! I love Jenny B. Jones and Ally Carter, too! (Really with Jenny I’ve only read There You’ll Find Me, but it was really good.) And I’ve noticed Ally Carter’s distinctive voice.
Jennifer A. Nielsen really has an amazing author voice. The False Prince by her is absolutely amazing how it mixes her voice and her main character, Sage’s, voice. Anyone who wants to see character voice should really try this one out.
I will definitely look it up! Thank you!
Ooh, I love this! Great post!
Thanks so much, Ashley!
I’d have to say Jenny b Jones- doesn’t everyone love her?!
Sandra Byrd and Robin Jones Gunn are both so warm and every piece of their stories fit so well and seem so right.
Bethany Turner is a newer author, I love her voice, she’s so witty!
Oh I LOVE Jenny B. Jones’ voice too! She’s so funny and relatable.
YES. Jenny B. Jones is really good.
Fun! New names to look up. Thank you!
Amazing post! I love C.S. Lewis and A.L. Tait. To be honest as I read A.L. Tait’s books I didn’t even realize she was a “she”. It was something about her writing voice when it mixed with her MC’s, who is a boy. I think I have a very little developed writing voice. One of my friends read some of my story and he said he could tell I wrote it, I asked him how he could tell…he said he didn’t know. ? Thank you so much, Shannon!
Fear not! Your voice will grow! I promise!
This is honestly such a comforting post for me. The whole idea of developing a voice has always been a bit daunting, and you’ve broken it down into manageable pieces. So thank you.
Favorite voices include those of Roseanna M. White, Jill Wolfson, and Jane Austen, all because they are so very distinct and unique.
I’m so glad to hear that, Camille! Rest in the fact that with time and effort, voice will happen. No need to panic.
Thank you, Ashley!
Thank you for this post! I really enjoy Brandon Sanderson’s voice, Nadine Brandes’s, and Roseanna M. White’s voices. I think I’ve sort of figured out my voice, but I’m still working on pinpointing it exactly. This post gives me some good ideas though!