Last month we talked about how to get started writing a new fantasy novel. You now have your list of the storyworld elements you need for your story, but you still might feel overwhelmed. Where do you start when building an entirely new world? I have a couple tips.
1. Who you are, the life you’ve lived, and the things that inspire you matter.
I grew up in Alaska without electricity or running water. I think that’s why I like an older fantasy world more than the worlds in contemporary, urban, or science fantasy stories.
I grew up reading Nancy Drew, and I while I don’t write mysteries, I almost always have a mystery component to my stories. Things are getting discovered and revealed. Plot twists. Things like that.
When I first started writing, I was heavily influenced by Frank Peretti and Francine Rivers. I wanted to incorporate both supernatural and romance elements into my stories.
So, use what inspires you.
2. Find real-life situations and history that fascinates you.
Odds are, other people like it too. And these inspirations don’t have to match up, history-wise. It’s sometimes better if they don’t. This is a form of retelling, and it works very well in fantasy. Study each of these ideas hard, then pull from them. Take what you like. Meld them.
For example, I’ve been telling my readers for a few years now that I’ve been working on a Regency fantasy. But it’s not a historical fantasy that takes place during the Regency era. I’m using Regency elements, society, nobility, expectations, and I’m playing with them.
One of my magic systems is inspired by psychology and parenting and concepts of children growing up in a dysfunctional home. That’s part of my own life story, and I’ve always wanted to find a way to write about it. Doing so in fantasy is something that’s fairly unique. I think that combination is going to—at some point—be really interesting.
I’ve also been inspired by Brandon Sanderson’s magic in The Rithmatist with the idea that someone missed their chance to learn magic that so fascinates them.
I’m again using mystery elements—one of my characters is a soldier conducting an inquiry into attacks on the city. That mystery is the main plot arc of this story.
So, look to your own interests. Grab hold of the things that fascinate you right now. Even the things that upset you right now. Pull those elements and passions into your worldbuilding, and it will bring it to life.
3. Write short stories
One more thing you can do to help you get started if you’re feeling stuck is to write short stories. Don’t understand the magic system you want to create? Write a short story about a kid learning to do it. Or maybe write about an expert teaching a class on that magic. You can write short stories for all the aspects of your worldbuilding. Yes, it’s time consuming, but it will help you develop your world. And you might even come up with some characters or situations that you later incorporate into your story. Also, these short stories will be great extras to give your readers once your book comes out.
4. Build your characters and the storyworld together.
As you work, continually ask yourself, “How are the storyworld elements I chose important to the character arcs and the problems my characters are going to face in the story?” Seek out answers about your characters past and present.
How does your world help form who your characters grew up to be? How does your world affect your character’s lifestyle and personality now? Things like magic, occupations, government, the presence of mythical creatures—all of that will have an impact on your character’s formative years. Figuring out the backstory of your characters can help you flesh out your storyworld.
Are there social classes in your story? If so, where does your character fit? So many stories only write characters in the noble class. Maybe think about doing something different. Start at the bottom of society and work your way up to create characters from every class. If you’ve created new ethnicity. How do their cultural and social norms affect their personality?
Assignment Time!
Going back to tip 2, if you were to pull from three elements that are of great interest to you right now, what would those be? This could be a historical time period, a culture, an animal, a sport, an author whose book floored you—it could be anything. Remember mine were a Regency era-like setting, child psychology, and mystery. Share yours in the comments!
This is so good!! Can’t wait to put this into practice!
Glad it was helpful, Hannah!
Love these ideas! The idea of a Regency-era setting for fantasy sounds super cool!
For the homework (it was oddly difficult to come up with 3 things), some of the elements that have been on my mind have been comedy, pioneer times, and the amazing magic of Brandon Mull’s Candy Shop War. Hmm. Not sure what it’d be like, but I think that’d sure be an interesting story!
Ooh! Yes, Riya. That sounds like you could create something really unique and fun with that combination. I really enjoy hearing the outcomes of this little assignment.
Strangely difficult assignment. I certainly didn’t expect it to be so hard!
Three things I’ve been interested in are Japanese culture, shapeshifters, and a story about Alexander the Great and his physician, Philip. Alexander was ill and about to drink some medicine prepared by Philip when he got a note warning him that the physician had been bribed and planned to poison him. Alexander handed the note to Philip while he drank the medicine, to show his trust in the man. He soon recovered from his illness.
I have no idea what sort of story I’d get by combining these three things, but it sure would be interesting.
Ooh! That would be a really interesting story! Wow! Sounds fun.
Ooo, Japanese culture is soooo interesting! And to mix those other two elements with it would be extra cool, Ainsley!
Speaking of Japan, I don’t know if you’ve heard of Bungo Stray Dogs, but the author cleverly combines (mostly japanese) Literature and authors, supernatural powers, and detectives fighting against an underground crime syndicate!
Thank you, Riley! I’ve never heard of Bungo Stray Dogs, but it sounds super interesting.
Ooh, these are fun tips! For my current WIP, I’m pulling inspiration from Shakespearean theater/Elizabethan England, heist stories (thanks, Ocean’s Eleven!), and Sherlock Holmes’s concept of a mysterious, hidden criminal mastermind.
That sounds awesome, Jerah! How fun.
Cool combinations, Ms. Jill!
In my WIP (it’s not a fantasy story, it’s gothic fiction, but there are some minor supernatural elements!) I’ve combined Opera, Germany’s Black Forest legends, and Jane Eyre!
Riley, that sounds amazing and so unique! Love it! Thanks for sharing.