Isn’t it great when you feel excited to write?
Yes, I have developed a writing routine that I faithfully stick to, and I believe in sitting down to write even when I don’t feel like it. I think the path to success as a writer is best built with good writing habits, but I also feel that the power of excitement for your writing time, for your story itself, shouldn’t be underestimated. As Sage Cohen says, “There is no energy source like delight to keep the writing coming.”
I recently had a front row seat to how enthusiasm can create astounding results. My best friend, author Roseanna M. White, had a staggering amount of books due this year–six. SIX. While many writers might say this is a great problem to have, akin to trying to figure out how to spend all your lottery winnings, it also takes a lot of time and energy to write, edit, and turn in six books. Roseanna had 2 due in March and 1 in May. She pushed herself across the finish line (which was really more of a “halfway mark” for her since there were still 3 more to write!) and then eagerly left town for a week-long beach vacation. She was ecstatic that she could take a break from writing, because she didn’t have anything due until September, and she was understandably exhausted.
But on vacation, Roseanna had a story idea. The idea wouldn’t leave her alone, so instead of taking the break she’d been longing for, she wrote 12 pages of notes about her new idea just because she wanted to. After vacation, she immediately left to teach at a writer’s conference, and while there she wrote 15,000 words of the new book, even though she was only working on it in the mornings before breakfast. Her delight with the story idea propelled her forward.
My guess is that you, like Roseanna, are working on a passion project. Most writers in our community are relatively early in their writing days and aren’t yet working with deadlines. But even when we’re working on something that we don’t have to write (by which I mean, there’s no publisher expecting a finished book by a specific date) we don’t always feel excited to write, do we?
I work almost exclusively on passion projects, but still there are days when I’m excited about writing and days when I’m not. While it’s unreasonable to expect that I’ll feel delighted every time I open up my Word doc, I decided to make a list of times that I feel most excited to write.
I limited myself to listing things that made me feel enthusiastic in the moment, rather than things that motivate me to write. For example, I’m often motivated by knowing that I’ll be able to check “Write 1k of manuscript” off my list for the day, but that’s not the same thing has being enthusiastic about the writing itself.
I feel most excited about writing when . . .
I’m working on a scene I really love.
If I’m working on a scene I love, good luck prying me away from my computer. Even if it’s time to go get my kids from school, you’ll find me trying to type as I put on my shoes.
This isn’t a unique observation. Rachel Aaron says the same thing in her book 2k to 10k, “The days when I broke 10k were the days when I was writing scenes I’d been dying to write since I planned the book. They were the candy bar scenes, the ones I wrote all that other stuff to get to. By contrast, my slow days . . . corresponded to the scenes I wasn’t that crazy about.” Later she says, “I decided then and there that, no matter how useful a scene might be for my plot, boring scenes had no place in my novels.”
This is what I strive for too. If a scene feels boring to write, instead of slogging my way through it, I’m asking why? Typically the scene feels boring to me for one of two of reasons:
- The POV character goes into the scene expecting something, and that’s exactly what happens. There’s no surprises, no twists, no shifting of the plot.
- The POV character makes no decisions in the scene. The story is happening to the character, not the character to the story.
I know I’m close to an important moment.
This could be that I’m close to an important moment in the story, like the main character discovering she was adopted, or it can be more of a timeline type thing, like I’m close to the big middle scene or I’m close to reaching the end.
Those are always days when it feels easy to get to work because I know fun stuff will be happening or I’m about to hit a writing milestone.
When my body is comfortable and rested.
We sometimes treat our writing life like only our brains and typing fingers matter.
Yes, I can write when I’m sick or tired, but it isn’t very enjoyable. Doing what I can to make my body comfortable–exercising, sleeping well, eating well, hydrating, etc,–goes a long way toward me feeling excited about writing.
The same is true for comfort while I’m writing. I try to keep the computer screen at an angle where I don’t have to look too far down. I wear wrist guards because otherwise my wrists get tingly and uncomfortable. I wear glasses to help me avoid eye strain. I added a pillow to my chair to support my lower back. When any of these elements are missing, I have a hard time feeling excited about writing because my body isn’t comfy for very long.
When others are working alongside me.
When I’m on a writing retreat, I often feel extra excited to get to work because the other writers I’m with are doing the same thing.
Being an author tends to be a very solitary profession. I don’t mind that, generally, but it’s also fun to feed off the energy of others.
This feels especially true when I get to brainstorm with writer friends on retreats. I’ll say something like, “I need my character to feel guilty about this murder. Why would he feel guilty?” and my writer friends offer suggestions. That makes working on that scene feel so fun.
Maybe a writing retreat isn’t an option for you right now, but you could incorporate some of the same elements into a regular day. You could set up a Zoom meeting to brainstorm with a friend, do writing sprints, or even just communicate throughout the day with a fellow writer by texting your word counts. (We do this kind of stuff on the Go Teen Writers Patreon group, and it’s so fun!)
When what I’m writing seems good.
Is there anything more fun than writing a joke into your story while you giggle about it? Or getting swept away with emotions as a beloved character dies? It’s delightful when what you’re writing feels good.
I was on a retreat with Jill Williamson back in 2014 while she was working on a Mission League book, and she kept laughing as she wrote because Spencer is such an enjoyable character for her to spend time with.
When I feel like I just wrote something clever, or witty, or poignant, I feel delighted to be writing.
Do you have to feel inspired to write? Of course not. I frequently don’t feel like writing until after I’ve started. That’s typically when my enthusiasm arrives, and that can work too. But if you want to feel more excited about writing before you start, consider making your own list of times that you feel most enthusiastic about writing.
What’s on your list? When do you feel excited to write?
Stephanie Morrill writes books about girls who are on an adventure to discover their unique place in the world. She is the author of several contemporary young adult series, as well as two historical young adult novels, The Lost Girl of Astor Street and Within These Lines. Within These Lines was a Junior Library Guild Gold Standard selection, as well as a YALSA 2020 Best Fiction for Young Adults pick. Since 2010, Stephanie has been encouraging the next generation of writers at her website, GoTeenWriters.com, which has been on the Writer’s Digest Best Websites for Writers list since 2017. She lives in the Kansas City area, where she loves plotting big and small adventures to enjoy with her husband and three children. You can connect with Stephanie and learn more about her books at StephanieMorrill.com, Instagram, Facebook, and Twitter.
All the same things are true for me–it’s so easy to write when I’m on that super intense scene I’ve been building up to. I think it also depends on the genre for me… because if I’m not writing in my sweet spot, it can feel like a lot more work and a lot less fun. I tried writing a couple science fiction books, and I loved my ideas, I just couldn’t get excited about the actual writing.
And as a total side note, my short story was recently published by WhiteCrown Publishing! Hooray! Here’s to one step forward! https://whitecrownpublishing.com/an-orphan-no-longer/
Congratulations, Hannah! I’m so glad you shared!
I must admit I’m a little jealous of Roseanna! And all those writers who have ideas and words pouring out. I’m constantly wrestling with everything. Like right now I’m trying to figure out if my story is working or if it’s broken.
Most days I make myself write, sometimes after 200-300 words I find a groove and its smoother for a little while, but I don’t have high word counts.
I always hope one day I’ll find the key and the floodgates will open, but I may never be that kind of writer. I’ve realized writing for me is an act of faith.
Tonya, have you every tried dictation? Or in Rachel Aaron’s 2k to 10k, she talks about a breakthrough she had when she learned to write out a summary of what happens in a scene before writing the scene itself. We all move at different paces, and you might just be a slower writer (I’m not terribly fast either!) but I wonder if there are some tweaks you can make to help you get in more of a flow.
Thanks! I do use dictation, I like that it’s so much faster.
I will have to try the chapter summaries. I think about things a little beforehand, but I’ll see if writingba summary works better.
I think one of my big weaknesses, like you posted above, is the story happening to the chatacters. Not the characters driving the story. I need to watch more closely how this in done in books and movies to see how I can implement.
Tonya- I’m the exact same way. A good way to find out if your story is working is to put it down. Awful, but necessary! Come back in a few weeks when you’re in a good frame of mind and reread the whole thing. Think about what you can do you make it better and see if you’re still exited. One thing about word count is to set yourself goals- like, “today I’ll write 400 words.” Once I’ve met that goal I usually can peer through the keyhole of the floodgates. Another thing is that you might have lost some of your passion for the story- that’s fine! It’s always easier to write when you’re jazzed about the story. Remind yourself why you’re writing your story. And *shh* word counts don’t matter. It doesn’t matter how much you wrote as long as it’s written! There’s a phrase that goes “the way to eat an elephant is one bite at a time.” Although we’re not eating elephants, this is a really useful phrase! Those bites will add up eventually. Keep at it!
“Peer through the keyhole of the floodgates.” I love that, Evangeline!
And yes, it’s absolutely fine to not be flying through words. There are lots of ways to be a writer! Slow and steady is completely fine.
Thanks! I’m going to set it aside, work on something else, and see if any clarity comes.