By Jill Williamson
I started writing my novel The New Recruit in 2004. I attended my first writer’s conference in 2005, where I learned that my writing needed a lot of work. Near the end of 2006, I was preparing to attend a large writer’s conference in the spring 2007. And I was at the point where I just didn’t know if my writing was good enough. How was I supposed to find out? Sure, I had critique partners who’d read my story. But none of them were published. How could I ensure that my manuscript was the best it could be before I went to this expensive conference?
I decided to pay a freelance editor to do a critique on my first three chapters. I was severely disappointed in what I received for my $75. The editor made some good points, but she didn’t seem to understand my audience. She chastised me for writing a book with a main character who was so flawed. She said it was horrible to read about a teen who told lies and got into fights. My gut told me she was wrong about that.
So I ended up attending that big writer’s conference no closer to knowing whether I had a clue what I was doing. I signed up for the mentoring clinic with James Scott Bell. In this class we each sent in one chapter of our story to all ten class participants and to the instructor. We had to critique them before the conference, then we’d spend time during the conference going over them.
This was awesome. In this group of writers I learned that I did have some talent. I also pitched The New Recruit at the conference and got two requests from agents. I had a good premise! I was so excited, but I still didn’t know if my story was good all the way through. I had met Becky Miller at the conference. And she did freelance editing. So I paid Becky to read my whole book. It wasn’t cheap, but it was more affordable than some. She gave me pages of notes, marked up my manuscript, and a very kind letter listing my strengths and what I needed to work on. She also volunteered to recommend that her publisher friend take a look at my manuscript once I cleaned it up.
So I got to work. But the publisher connection didn’t pan out. And later, when both agents from the big conference rejected The New Recruit, I figured something major must be wrong. I had met Jeff Gerke at that big writer’s conference, and he had told me he did freelance editing on some very well-known novelists. Novelists who were weird, like me.
I saved up and paid Jeff to read The New Recruit. His feedback changed everything. But by then I had written a few more books, and I was completed obsessed with my new fantasy novel, the book that became By Darkness Hid. So I waited until I finished the fantasy novel, then I went in and rewrote The New Recruit. Again.
That next summer I attended another big conference. But only one house (AMG) was looking for YA stories. I submitted a mini proposal for The New Recruit and my fantasy novel. And I submitted my fantasy proposal to Jeff, since I so admired his editorial feedback.
AMG asked for the full on The New Recruit! Turned down the fantasy novel. And Jeff asked for the full on the fantasy novel. Jeff published my fantasy novel, By Darkness Hid, which went on to win several awards. AMG had The New Recruit for over a year, going back and forth with it. They eventually turned it down and published Wayne Batson’s The Sword in the Stars. I found out later that they could only publish one book at the time and Wayne had a bigger platform and following. I got to sit with the editor for AMG at a conference this past summer, and it was fun to talk about how his house rejected both The New Recruit and By Darkness Hid.
That’s how it works in publishing. Sometimes you get rejected because of craft. Sometimes you get rejected because there is only one slot and the other author had more experience than you. Sometimes a publisher will take a chance on you anyway. And eventually you get to make friends with everyone and have a good laugh.
My point is, good things come to those who work hard, are patient, persistent, and willing to invest in their own careers.
Are you ready to pay someone for a critique of your work? Ask yourself:
-Is the book done?
-Have you been critiqued by your peers first?
-Have you rewritten the book until you are satisfied?
-Have you done your research to find the right freelance editor who will understand your genre?
-Have you considered paying someone to read your first three chapters and synopsis first? That could point out some good stuff and save you a lot of money in paying for a full novel edit.
Keep in Mind
1. You might find out that your writing isn’t quite there yet
And that’s okay.
2. You might waste your money.
Hopefully not. But
3. You might get lots of praise and still get rejected.
4. You might get a referral or request for your manuscript.
Here is a list of Freelance Editors I recommend:
- Rebecca LuElla Miller
- Aaron D. Gansky
- Camy Tang
- Cindy Martinusen
- Kathy Ide
- Lissa Halls Johnson
- Pam Halter
- Susan May Warren
- The Fiction Fix-It Shop, Meredith Efken
BONUS! Write Now Relief
Today, I (Jill) am participating in a critique auction in an effort to raise money for victims of Sandy. This might not be the best way to get a bargain on a critique, but if you’re ready to have a partial critique done, check out which authors are participating. It’s for a good cause.
WHAT: Bid on a 50-page critique of your novel by a published novelist! Highest bidder will send their amount to Samaritans Purse for their relief efforts for the victims of Superstorm Sandy.