Making it sparkle

When I originally posted about the second draft, I mentioned four areas to keep an eye on as you did your read-through: Plot, Characters, Pacing, Theme/Symbolism. I originally thought I would need to do more in-depth posts on all those subjects. But I don’t have...

Editing the big stuff: Plot

The second draft is the ideal time to scrutinize your plot and make necessary changes.I find this to be the toughest part of editing because it often involves cutting huge chunks and rewriting. Rewrites are necessary to the process of crafting a good book, so grumble...

Internal and External Motivations

I received this question from a writer, “It’s difficult for me to find what my main character wants… I only know what she wants internally, but I can’t figure out what she wants externally, and I’ve heard from many different sources that...

Revealing too much of your characters too fast

Last Friday we talked about making sure your characters are accurate, and some general things to look for with your characters.The temptation is to take all your wonderful research, all the cool knowledge you have about your characters, and work it in as quickly as...

Editing the big stuff: Characters

On Wednesday we talked about fixing the big things first. One of the big things we want to make sure we get right is our characters. We want to make sure they sound fresh and original, that they’re responding in ways that make sense given their background, and...