Personality Types: Celebrities and Forums

by Jill WilliamsonOn Tuesday I talked about labeling your characters. I had labeled my Captives character Mason as an analyst. And I sometimes compared him in my mind to Mr. Spock from Star Trek or Sheldon Cooper of The Big Bang Theory to help me write his...

Labeling Your Character to Help Characterize

by Jill Williamsonphoto©2009 Bradley Gordon, FlickrAt a writer’s conference I attended, the brilliant Susie May Warren suggested that when you start thinking up new characters, you should give them a label. Susie is the author of many books and owns My...

Section Breaks vs. Scene Breaks

by Jill WilliamsonHave you ever been reading a book and noticed that sometimes a break in a scene is depicted by asterisks or some other fancy symbols, and sometimes there is only a wide space before a new scene begins? What’s the difference between the two, and...

Rhetoric, Part Three: Polysyndeton & Simile

by Jill WilliamsonHere is my conclusion on rhetoric. I wrote two other posts on the subject. In case you missed them, we first talked about anaphora and amplificationrhetoric. Then we talked about asyndeton, climax, and metaphors. Rhetoric can add a lot of fun to your...

Examples of Query Letters for Novels that Sold

by Jill Williamson This past summer, Roseanna White wrote a great post called, What does the perfect query letter look like? This is an excellent post with an excellent example. I like examples. And I think you do too. So I scavenged up some more examples of query...